Writing



 ** During Term 1 and 2 we have been writing stories. I’m in Jodie’s group for writing ever Wednesday. I’m in Jodie’s group because I think I need more help with writing. I think that my stories have improved a lot and have more detail in them. We help Jodie make her plan and we give her ideas and then we go off and write our plan. I think I’ve gotten a lot better at doing plans Jodie has taught me how to do a real plan. My favourite story was the Andy Griffiths story because you could make it really funny. I think my spelling is great. Jodie has taught me how to edit properly because I couldn’t really do it last year because we didn’t do that much writing. I think I have improved a lot this year. The stories that we wrote were Andy Griffith’s story, animal story, portal story, letter to chuppa chups. I also think that the letter to the chuppa chup company were fun because we could make up anything we liked. Here are my stories have a look at them!

Here is my Andy Griffiths story!

Here is my solider letter

Here ismy lette to the chuppa chup company! **